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Spotted in tomorrow's newspaper

(And yes, I mean tomorrow's newspaper: I'm proofreading the page right now.)
I know that technically, there's nothing wrong with these two paragraphs, but it just seems to me that the wording of the last sentence here could have been better chosen:
A free showing of “Super Size Me” will be held at 6:30 p.m. Tuesday, Aug. 23 at the Auburn Library, 350 Nevada St. It is presented by The Health Spine-Wellness Centers.
The film will be followed by a brief discussion on health and diet. Snacks will be provided.

Update - I cheerfully admit defeat. I have been outdone:

[21:47] kadyg: That's almost as good as "drinks will be provided" in the Breastfeeding Workshop notice that we keep running.
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